establishing good relationshipin the workplace is not important as the primary goal of every person is to focus on work. to what extent do you agree with thois statement.
As a matter of fact,human civilization has always been called as socialized one universally,so it doesnot matter whether it is workplace or somewhere else,human always seeks for companionship.Therefore,the statement written above does not convine me to believe work as a primary goal of an workplace,Hence, this essay is all about why good relationship is important in the workplace.
It is certainly true that workplace of two words that is work and place. So ultimately, it means the place where we work but actually it is beyond that.Since, i have studied management in my bachelors i am clear with what workplace actually need for it to boom, social need is among them.Moreover, natural phenomenon with in us strives for love,affection,attention,recognition and many more five star hotel.For instance,have human resource department separately which is responsible for team building strategy to strengthen the relationship with in group .Therefore,once a year ,they hold special event such as colleague party team outing etc. so that they can celebrate employees relation in a better way.
In addition ,work itself can be monotonous it doesnot include fair competition among employee promotion,social life,recongnition etc and it can be possible only through good working relationship. Along with that greater productivity can achieved when they add extra enthusiam to work which can be obtained with the support of the team members.
Thus, I would like to say that despite work being a primary goal social life plays an important role in the work place and good connection among employees creates a better workplace that helps a company ro thrive.SA;so,employee develop a feeling of belongings with the company.
- Some people say that teenagers should work part time and earn money This way they will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined Others argue that teenagers shouldn t sacrifice their rest and after school activities to work Discuss both v 78
- some people say that teenager should work part time and earn money this way they will learn basic lesson about work and become more disciplined others argue that teenager shouldnt sacrifice rest and after school activities to work disscuss both view and g 84
- Some people believe that it is bets to accept a bad situation such as an unsartisfactory job or shortage of money others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation disccuss both views and give your own opinion 61
- establishing good relationshipin the workplace is not important as the primary goal of every person is to focus on work to what extent do you agree with thois statement 61
- Some people say that teenagers should work part time and earn money This way they will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined Others argue that teenagers shouldn t sacrifice their rest and after school activities to work Discuss both v 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46816479401 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.03674783469 2.80592935109 144% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 169.813703445 49.4020404114 344% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.571428571 106.682146367 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.1428571429 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.8571428571 7.06120827912 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19231107095 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882312640446 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497280792883 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120511294051 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338193630571 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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