The reading passage and the lecture are both talking about T rex dinosaurs' legs bone. The lecturer believes, hallow inside these fractur bones fill with materials look like blood vessels, red blood cells and collagens fibers. However, the writer has other opinion. She mentions, author believes about these T rex' leg bone is skeptical.
To begin with, the author states, there are many small channels in side broken leg bone which are similar to hollows inside bone where veins and arteries were located. These grooves filled with organic material which might represent blood vessels. This statement is challenged by professor. She says, the presence of organic soft tissue is not necessary mean that this material is blood vessels. It may be some thing other else like bacteria, which colonize bone hollow. Moreover, this bacteria leave behind organic materials residue from these bacteria.
Second, the other asserts, there are spheres shape remnants in side bone hollow which are same shape of red blood cells. The lecturer in the other hand refutes this argument. She mentions, these spheres cells do not actually represent blood vessels. She elaborates on many organic materials have spheres shape.
Finally, the reading points out, there is material look like collagen matrix in bone hollow. The lecturer contradicts this point. She states, collagen fibers show from one thousand years. collagen fibers from T rex should be found at least seventy million years. Therefore, these fibers may be from different sources like from skin of researchers who might hold these fossils.
The reading passage and the lecture are both talking about T rex dinosaurs' legs bone. The lecturer believes, hallow inside these fracture bones fill with materials look like blood vessels, red blood cells and collagens fibers. However, the writer has other opinion. She mentions, author believes about these T rex' leg bone is skeptical.
To begin with, the author states, there are many small channels in side broken leg bone which are similar to hollows inside bone where veins and arteries were located. These tunnels filled with organic material which might represent blood vessels. This statement is challenged by professor. She says, the presence of organic soft tissue is not necessary mean that this material is blood vessels. It may be some thing other else like bacteria, which colonize bone hollow. Moreover, this bacteria leave behind organic materials residue from these bacteria.
Second, the other asserts, there are spheres shape remnants in side bone hollow which are same shape of red blood cells. The lecturer in the other hand refutes this argument. She mentions, these spheres particles do not actually represent blood vessels. She elaborates on many organic materials have spheres shape.
Finally, the reading points out, there is material look like collagen matrix in bone hollow. The lecturer contradicts this point. She states, collagen fibers show from one thousand years. collagen fibers from T rex should be found at least seventy million years. Therefore, these fibers may be from different sources like from skin of researchers who might hold these fossils.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, at least, talking about, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 252.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30952380952 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26553593245 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575396825397 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6425729498 49.2860985944 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4210526316 110.228320801 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2631578947 21.698381199 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06452816374 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.490762412193 0.272083759551 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146070382186 0.0996497079465 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140666916102 0.0662205650399 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.327232704948 0.162205337803 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.244050402733 0.0443174109184 551% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.8541721854 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.63 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.