Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.
What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is sometimes argued that higher education system has the responsibility to offer seniors more useful technique in professional fields, while others claim that campus is supposed to focus on academic schooling. From my perspective, universities that are equipped with career teaching resources could offer regarding courses, others should keep their main function of traditional teaching.
To begin with, it is necessary for some universities to provide students with skillful information to some extent. Firstly, numerous students are supposed to entering the market of employment after graduation, and getting hang of adequate working abilities helps graduates to have access to better job opportunities. Recent decades have witnessed an increasing number of people who are salaried higher in the worldwide scale because of their extraordinary official skills gained at school. Furthermore, a certain number of staffs working in some universities are qualified with knowledge in diverse workplaces, symbolizing an educational resource which should be taken advantage of.
However, the importance attached into intense and specific academic education is also rather essential, more universities should stay in this teaching style. The first reason is that teachers and professors in universities are mostly proficient in some research fields, and they are occupied with tasks. Thus, there would not be enough curriculum or teachers to help students with their career prospect. Secondly, schools aim to teach students knowledge in terms of their majors and overall development, the value of which could not be simplified only by its apparent meaning of becoming an employer. Thirdly, it is obviously that graduates who have great passion to further theirs studies by persuading a PhD degree are becoming more and more common in the whole society, which means it is not that necessary for them to gain professional skills during this period.
In conclusion, I do hold the view that universities that are qualified with resources could offer more skills of working for students while other universities are suggested to pay attention solely on research-guided education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64634146341 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98882511202 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.6735069389 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.333333333 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264498889218 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978642108162 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663975732678 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160014193104 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444803925616 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.