Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Pawanpreet Kaur from India. Recently, I have completed my graduation in commerce. But last month, i saw yor advertisement about enrollment in english course started in your school. I want to get admission in your school in advance english subject which is for 4 weeks and commence from next monday.
I want to know about some information of my course that the completion certificate of this course is availabe with in a week after the course because i have applied for job next month so i desire this certificate as soon as possible. I want to know the amenties accessible for students such as accomodation. Actually, I prefer a room just close to my school as i do not want to waste my time in travelling and trafic. I want to utilise this time in my studies.
Moreover, I have a special request for my diet. Literally, I am extremely conscious about my diet since I have a good and different taste of food so I need a seperate room along with kithcen. Futhermore, I am a best player of under 21 cricket team. Therefore, I need a playground for my practise.
I am waiting for your response.
Your's Faithfully,
Pawan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...graduation in commerce. But last month, i saw yor advertisement about enrollment ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...se i have applied for job next month so i desire this certificate as soon as poss...
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Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e this certificate as soon as possible. I want to know the amenties accessible fo...
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Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...refer a room just close to my school as i do not want to waste my time in travell...
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Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...om along with kithcen. Futhermore, I am a best player of under 21 cricket team. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63902439024 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90419704905 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570731707317 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2907892365 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9285714286 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142567227798 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048711890378 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516112245709 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084536112277 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540025858909 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.