It is believed by some masses that tutees who consume their time in travelling and working between the period of schooling and university are getting more benefits as compared to that student who continue their tertiary education just after completing high school. I also strongly agree with this notion because experience and knowledge are paramount for pupils for their future career and further studies.
To begin with, the main reason why working student receives extra advantages is experience and knowledge. To explain it, these student became more punctual, responsible, disciplined and also get knowledge as well as experience of financial management. For example, a survey was conducted by Canadian Scientist Department in which they found those tutees are more active and experienced who started working instead of college. Thus, with the help of experience, knowledge and office etiquettes they are more confident about career goals.
Furthermore, a youngster who travel the world meeting with new people and gain the knowledge of various culture of other countries which is useful for their higher studies. To elaborate this, traveling is the best way to enhance the awareness and to get relaxation. For instance, University of Colombia researched that most of the students are introvert and feel hesitation while speaking to another person if they don't work and travel. As a result, every trip can increase knowledge and helps to make someone extrovert.
To conclude this, although students should focus on their studies but break of work and knowledge is must after their schooling before the universities as practical knowledge helps to understand the modules clearly.
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- You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas You would like some information about their courses Write a letter to the school In your letter ask about the school say what kind of accommodation you want mention any special requests you hav 85
- In companies promotions to high positions should be given to employees inside the company and not to somebody outside the company or new hiring To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from you 77
- You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas You would like some information about their courses Write a letter to the school In your letter ask about the school say what kind of accommodation you want mention any special requests you hav 74
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this student' or 'these students'?
Suggestion: this student; these students
...xperience and knowledge. To explain it, these student became more punctual, responsible, disc...
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Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...hile speaking to another person if they dont work and travel. As a result, every tri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43726235741 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72759563264 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615969581749 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3811523734 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322586118189 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109899506616 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122143178914 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211228102577 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983853930116 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.