Several nations let old people decide to work to any age they desire. Some people hold the view that they shouldn’t grant them the ability to do so. From my opinion, I believe that as long as they are willing to continue their working life, no one should prohibit it.
Several nations let old people decide to work to any age they desire. Some people hold the view that they shouldn’t grant them the ability to do so. From my opinion, I believe that as long as they are willing to continue their working life, no one should prohibit it.
On the one hand, the workforce around the world is witnessing a gradual decline throughout recent years. According to the nation's average population age, European countries are experiencing a drop in the quantity of working age adults. For instance, Poland’s companies are facing problems in finding young citizens to fill up their vacancies. This reflects that without the elderly help carrying workloads, there won't be enough manpower to help with today’s problems.
There is no denying that permitting people with declining health in their retirement age to continue to dedicate to work is a bad way to protect civilian’s health. Most governments give precedence to its people’s health, services are handed to their people for free and old ones get good treatments. Working during old age devours strength. For example, a major part of those who used to work a 9 to 5 retire with scoliosis and spine disorders. In general, work age depends on how good one can perform and resolve health issues.
To conclude, working at any age must not be banned but working with health matters should not be promoted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to carry' or 'carry'.
Suggestion: to carry; carry
... reflects that without the elderly help carrying workloads, there wont be enough manpowe...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can perform and resolve health issues. To conclude, working at any age must no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, for instance, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99141630901 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64404853406 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639484978541 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0121182651 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4615384615 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.503782674534 0.244688304435 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178888778088 0.084324248473 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177212439512 0.0667982634062 265% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329826965 0.151304729494 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.333226972111 0.056905535591 586% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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