The chart reveals the changes in the number of pounds made by selling five particular products over four seasons in the year.
The chart reveals the changes in the number of pounds made by selling five particular products over four seasons in the year.
Generally speaking, the amount of money made by trading garden and household products witnessed a gradual decrease, while that of the remaining experienced an upward trend. Additionally, clothing was the heaviest consumed product.
In spring, clothing products generated 100000 pounds, then dropped to 80000 during summer,which was followed by a decline to its low at 75000 which bounced to 120000 in winter. Similar trend can be seen with that of electrical equipment, starting out at 60000 pounds, fell to its lowest point at approximately 50000 pound in summer, but rose noticeably to exactly 80000 at the end of the year.Garden sales on another hand, despite fluctuating around 35000 to 40000, it still dipped to precisely 20000 in winter. Household sale performance followed a similar trend, gradually shrinking to just under 50000 pounds in winter. Finally children’s toy’s revenues, originally 30000 pounds in spring,later plummeted in the summer to correctly 20000 pounds, but made it recovery to 60000 pounds in winter
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...nds, then dropped to 80000 during summer,which was followed by a decline to its low at...
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Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'pound' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'pounds'.
Suggestion: pounds
...its lowest point at approximately 50000 pound in summer, but rose noticeably to exact...
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Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Garden
...to exactly 80000 at the end of the year.Garden sales on another hand, despite fluctuat...
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Line 5, column 624, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...g to just under 50000 pounds in winter. Finally children’s toy’s revenues, originally 3...
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Line 5, column 692, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , later
...enues, originally 30000 pounds in spring,later plummeted in the summer to correctly 20...
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Line 5, column 796, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...de it recovery to 60000 pounds in winter
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, still, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41208791209 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82043729978 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659340659341 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.3007103433 43.030603864 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.714285714 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310240802099 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190262987422 0.103423049105 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.331269098335 0.0843802449381 393% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.389310831823 0.15604864568 249% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.43182861483 0.0819641961636 527% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.