The table presents the weekly total profit made by a small restaurant located in a commercial centre of a town reported from the week of October 7th to 13th.
Immediately, it is noticeable that the dinner sales of this restaurant are higher than the lunch's sales. In addition, the sales for these two categories maintain a stable increase in the first five days of the week but a decrease in the weekend.
The gross revenue of lunch meals started on Monday with $2,400 and increasing from nearly $200 to $2,595 on Wednesday in which time it is the highest sales throughout the whole week. On Thursday, the sales drop to 2,375 dollars but immediately surge to 2,500 dollars on the next day. On the weekend, the income of the restaurant reported plummeting from more than 2400 dollars on weekdays to lower than 2000 dollars on Saturday and Sunday ($1,950 and $1,550 respectively).
Similarly, the same tendency also occurs in terms of dinner's sales. From Monday to Wednesday, the total revenue surges from $3,623 to $3,850 and decreases slightly on Thursday. On the next day, the sales increase again and reach their peak of 4,350 dollars. On Saturday and Sunday, the total income plunges to 2,900 and 2,450 dollars which is much lower compared to the sales of weekdays.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: ,
...th ,400 and increasing from nearly 00 to ,595 on Wednesday in which time it is the...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...than 2000 dollars on Saturday and Sunday ,950 and ,550 respectively. Similarly,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, similarly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79816513761 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48902988299 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559633027523 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4299345444 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.6 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121493006291 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490855182991 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380207511468 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083001318721 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297155331515 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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