Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's development era, human thinking has advanced and is far different from the past which indicates that many young people nowadays have become more independent. I strongly advocate the thesis that the young generation can make decisions about their own lives and do not need to be based on their parents' opinion.
To begin with, parents might not be the one who understands children except themselves. Children can understand clearly what they want and their ability to do something. This means that they can easily choose what thing is suitable for them. For example, many households in VietNam still have the traditional from time immemorial; parents always force their children to go to the top university to study. Understand that parents just want the best thing for their children; however, parents should know about their children's capability in order to suggest to them the best direction for their future school or career. Through this situation, people might see, many cases from the past, old generation have a backward in their way of thinking.
Furthermore, the young generation at the moment can study in a better condition compared to the past. Young people who have a good living condition can have wide thinking so that they not only choose the suitable selection but also choose the best way to help their family. I am the one who luckily lives in a good family; however, I do not depends on the family and always tries to help the family in everything. For instance, I always try to lower the tuition fee by regist in getting the scholarship. This implies that, even when I do not depend too much on parents, I still have a good choice for my self which is benefits for my family either.
All things considered, I believe young generation always want to choose the things they want even they will receive the consequences if that selection is false.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'depend'?
Suggestion: depend
...ves in a good family; however, I do not depends on the family and always tries to help ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85358255452 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5432392946 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520249221184 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1749363435 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295030952577 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985746668358 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746872138253 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175092507155 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103520319424 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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