It is an irrefutable to say that in this modern era countless people caring about their appearance more than by gone era, because because they are professional. Transformation is indeed crucial with the time. I totally support given notion and reasons behind this phenomena will be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.
To embark with, appearance of people have altered significantly with the time. In this competitive era every person are working professionaly across the globe. Thus, they need to wear good uniform or appropriate clothes to look good with their other staff members. In addition to this, if masses have to work with a good organization, they must have good look along with their other skills. If civilisation wear extraordinary clothes and they look good, they not only get better job, but also get promotion timely by their personality.
Furthermore, continue follow of their favorite celebraties is also one of the reasons in people's appearance. People in the past never changed tge colour of their hair, nowadays it is quite common. Masses used to wear trousers and shirt rather than jeans and T-shirts. Some giant companies also recommend same type of uniform to their all employees, it wasn't in earlier time. To epitome, a comapany in india namely torrent offers same type of uniform to their workers for good appearance.
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that transformation is indeed paramount for citizens as it provides numerous benefits to them.
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- The best way to understand other cultures is to work for a multinational organisation To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: because
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87561587606 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608333333333 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.146708429 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.1428571429 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164735489472 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552585956316 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331454579059 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909960658298 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477409943845 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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