Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Law is to be made by government for any country for citizen to maintain social dignity. Government has put some regulation, if some one break the law then he may pay penality on the basis of an law. I partially disagree with given claim suggested that Many problem of modern society cannot solved by laws and the legal system.
Laws and regualtion are to be made for citizen, problem which face by society solved by laws and legal system. Consider one example, if some one bought house and he gave house on rent basis. according to law, he has to made 11 months contract which is to be to be renewed every year. The law including an strong rule which is to be followed by tenant and house owner. It's an legal confirmation or contract between two person.
In my opinion, for Modern society many problems, solve by only law and regulation. Let us take example, in an society Grocery shop owener made people fool by telling an certain things. If person allwed to carry an grocery on wheat and sugar upto 5 kg, he may not allowed them to carry the same then at that time , law is held strong which provide an strong evidences that according to law, individual person carry up to 5 kg.
In considering reason,Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds. It's acceptable statement, even though Government has applied number of laws and regulation, if an country not follow laws then it's not worth. rather, country not developed accordingly as number of other country's developed. Mindeset of every one different, some people favourable to adopt laws and regulation and follow the same, some may have strong cunning filling about laws and regulation.
There are number of cases in daily newspaper and on Television, shows that number of rapes, crimes on women. In an pandemic situation, government has put some laws and regulation on people, still they break the law attend the function, meet each other. In vehicle act, two wheeler driver put compulsory helmet when drive, but in actual nearly 50-60% people follow government regulation.
In considering about law, government has made law and regulation for beneficial purpose towards an citizen. It's upto citizen, according to their mind set law and regulation vary differently. so one can't regret that laws and regulation are for us, for our benefit. Whenever Government put law and reguation on some thing, so they may consider all the point before applying.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...hen he may pay penality on the basis of an law. I partially disagree with given cl...
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Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many problems'.
Suggestion: Many problems
...isagree with given claim suggested that Many problem of modern society cannot solved by laws...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
... legal system. Consider one example, if some one bought house and he gave house on rent ...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
... house and he gave house on rent basis. according to law, he has to made 11 months contra...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to be'.
Suggestion: to be
...has to made 11 months contract which is to be to be renewed every year. The law including a...
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Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e renewed every year. The law including an strong rule which is to be followed by ...
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Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...followed by tenant and house owner. Its an legal confirmation or contract between ...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...al confirmation or contract between two person. In my opinion, for Modern society m...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...and regulation. Let us take example, in an society Grocery shop owener made people...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...shop owener made people fool by telling an certain things. If person allwed to car...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
... made people fool by telling an certain things. If person allwed to carry an grocery o...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...rtain things. If person allwed to carry an grocery on wheat and sugar upto 5 kg, h...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...them to carry the same then at that time , law is held strong which provide an str...
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Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...time , law is held strong which provide an strong evidences that according to law,...
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Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'evidence'?
Suggestion: evidence
... is held strong which provide an strong evidences that according to law, individual perso...
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Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Laws
...rry up to 5 kg. In considering reason,Laws cannot change what is in peoples hearts...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...plied number of laws and regulation, if an country not follow laws then its not wo...
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Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Rather
...try not follow laws then its not worth. rather, country not developed accordingly as n...
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Line 9, column 113, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...at number of rapes, crimes on women. In an pandemic situation, government has put ...
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Line 9, column 282, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'driver' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'drivers'.
Suggestion: drivers
...each other. In vehicle act, two wheeler driver put compulsory helmet when drive, but i...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...people follow government regulation. In considering about law, government has m...
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Line 11, column 97, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...gulation for beneficial purpose towards an citizen. Its upto citizen, according to...
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Line 11, column 192, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...et law and regulation vary differently. so one cant regret that laws and regulatio...
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Line 11, column 199, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...and regulation vary differently. so one cant regret that laws and regulation are for...
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Line 11, column 310, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...ver Government put law and reguation on some thing, so they may consider all the point bef...
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Line 11, column 374, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...consider all the point before applying.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, may, so, still, then, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 414.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86473429952 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57569284699 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497584541063 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1486096351 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5454545455 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286309447323 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104569513031 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113856789633 0.0758088955206 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160674489568 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764938216778 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.