An increasing number of adolescents who participated in criminal activities has raised concerns in modern society. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons that lead to this problem and the reasonable measures of punishment for youth criminals.
This issue can be attributed to a host of causes. For one, young criminals normally have a lack of education due to family conditions. Most young delinquents do not live in a quality family, they are orphans so that they do not have enough social education from their parents. Thus, they can be easily attracted to society's vices which trigger the increase of young law-breakers. Moreover, many parents pamper their children so much and let their juveniles play games that have uncensored content games. On account of that, youngsters are motivated to take the same action from violent games to reality. For instance, the youth who play too many theft games tends to have a motivation of stealing items from other people in society because of the negative content from all games that they have played.
Several solutions could be taken to punish these corrupt adolescents. The government can impose stricter sentences on juvenile offenders. Therefore, young perpetrators can improve their thinking and feel regret about what they have done. Furthermore, all youngster delinquents should be sent to vocational training centers to teach them about social values and help them reintegrate into the community. Owing to this, these children can become better individuals in the foreseeable future as they have provided a lot of knowledge about society and widen their perspective about how to develop into friendly citizens. More importantly, parents must play an active role in educating their children and providing a safe and supportive environment for them to grow up.
To sum up, the growth of crimes among teenagers creates negative impacts on society and individuals. Despite plenty of reasons cause this issue such as lack of education or uncensored content games, it still can be tackled by the government and parents to levy stricter jail times, send them to vocal training centers and provide teens a friendly environment to prevent further damage to future generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27808988764 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76042714502 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4680832588 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.529411765 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116102368956 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361351370661 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358009931486 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0626945484412 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316144867837 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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