Should government funding be spent on education and the health care system?
There is a controversial view heating a debate over whether the national budget should be allocated on schooling and health care systems or not. Particularly, this phenomenon has both pros and cons. I would contend that this action is of necessity since the advantages still outweigh their counterpart.
Obviously, , educational and medical service plays a paramount role in backbone industries which considerably contribute to the prosperity of a national economy, especially the economy of which. In terms of schooling, as people are living in a knowledge-based society, providing education to citizens will give them a high chance to land a more promising job and enhance their family’s living standard. Moreover, schooling will broaden the residents' horizons, so that it can foster a wealth of qualified employees, and which then helps their country to keep up with the fast change of the world. With regard to the healthcare system, if individuals can't get access to this service, they will run a high risk of suffering from undesirable pain and falling prey to infectious diseases. Therefore, their physical condition is unable to meet the heavy workload and high requirement from jobs, and it will negatively affect the economic state. In a worsened case, they could become a burden to society.
Unfortunately, those two mentioned above are prohibitively exorbitant, hence, not everyone can enjoy these services comfortably, especially impoverished students and low-income families with many descendants. If the governor provides financial support, all dire problems will be well-addressed. For instance, no one will have to drop out of school and not need to trade off their health because of their ability to pay. Meanwhile, it is also immoral to put the responsibility of paying on the Government’s shoulder. To those who have poor attitudes toward their academic journey and straying living habits such as drug addiction, though they were grinding poverty, they should not be the one who is legally eligible for this financial support since they make not so much contribution for the sake of the society.
In conclusion, according to the significance of the education and healthcare system to the economy of a nation, money coming from the national coffer is extremely necessary. However, there should be a strict criterion on who should be offered this financial support from the governors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1992.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3692722372 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07098590675 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611859838275 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3522816186 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.8 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7333333333 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183263611459 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057803509692 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738898574361 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131236802051 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694147074655 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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