The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on,
above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting
the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram delineates that how the water cycle works. The water cycle process is essential in the formation of the water.
Overall, it can be inferred that there are mainly 4 vital steps in the process of water cycle. These are cloud formation, precipitation, surface runoff and condensation of the water vapor.
The sun plays the crucial role in condensing of the water vapor that leads to the formation of the cloud. After the cloud production, the water is precipitated in the form of rainfall on the impervious layer. However, the rain that is precipitated and the snow that is melted collects further to three parts via surface runoff. The water can get collected in the lakes, ocean and ground. The water that is collected in the ground is known as groundwater.
On the other hand, the evaporation can be considered as the most substantial step taking place in the water cycle. The water comprising in various sources evaporates to form again the water vapor and subsequently formation of the cloud. Moreover, about 80 % of the total water vapor is contributed from the ocean.
Likewise, the steps from condensing the water vapor continues and repeats thus, known as the water cycle.
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- In the past most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else Nowadays most people live in large cities where they only knew a few people in their area What do you think were the advantages and the disadvantages of living in small comm 67
- The diagram shows how apple is canned Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 61
- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, likewise, moreover, so, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98009950249 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70121529359 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492537313433 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3551219923 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.0 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204157402626 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950275072849 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476766000297 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145408163418 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454046058679 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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