You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.
Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words.
Developed countries are expected to contribute their wealth towards enhancement of low GDP countries by sharing aids like food and technology. I completely agree with this statement and in following paragraphs I will be supporting my views.
To begin with, nations those are well versed with finances shall join hands with underdeveloped nations to enhance the growth of the latter. While supporting the poorer countries they will not only create harmony amongst nations but also enhance global trades within the nations. While creating trouble free trading environment within countries they will also plant their own economic growth which will contribute to their finances to take care of funds required within the nation. For example, USA and Canada have join hands together to support developing countries to lend vaccines during this pandemic situation. By doing so, they have ensured that they are willing to eradicate pandemic scenario from all around the world to generate peaceful environment on global level.
Furthermore, governments of some of the developing countries are equipped with abundance of manpower within their country. Government of this nations shall have developed systems and technologies that can utilize manpower as resources to generate aids that are otherwise not sufficiently produces to meet demands of the whole world. India is the best example where we had billions of resources working on manufacturing raw materials and equipments that was the need of the hour for the world during the pandemic situation. India in collaboration with United states produced lifesaving equipments to support many of the countries which otherwise would have been engulfed in the pandemic scenario.
To conclude, rich nations are the backbone of poorer nations in the time of need by distributing some of their aids. Whenever the times arises, the former shall lend their hands to uplift low income nations for the development of the global well-being and create world that is better place to live in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 280, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hance global trades within the nations. While creating trouble free trading environme...
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Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...al level. Furthermore, governments of some of the developing countries are equipped with ...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...wer within their country. Government of this nations shall have developed systems an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38170347003 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72777468085 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536277602524 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3535835925 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.230769231 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150319809661 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624287099837 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458388788421 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103032716041 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321230471108 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.