You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course.
Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about:
what course are you doing now
why you are not satisfied with that course
what course you would like to change to.
Respected sir,
I would like to inform you that I'm a first year student learning B.Tech course at your college. The classes are very good and the lecturers also put in a lot of effort explaining each topic but I'm personally not very interested to continue it.
Let me explain the reasons as to why am I not satisfied with this course. The subjects are all theory based and I was expecting it to be more practical. Though this course provides a lot of career opportunities, I feel lost in the vastness of the topics which thereby effects my concentration level therefore, I feel I should opt for a more simpler and smaller course.
Could you please allow me to select B.Arch course as it fits the above mentioned criteria. I would be grateful to you for this kind act.
Thank you for your consideration
Yours faithfully
Manjyot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...sir, I would like to inform you that Im a first year student learning B.Tech co...
^^
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Tech
...that Im a first year student learning B.Tech course at your college. The classes are...
^^^^
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...lot of effort explaining each topic but Im personally not very interested to conti...
^^
Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'simpler' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: simpler
...el therefore, I feel I should opt for a more simpler and smaller course. Could you please...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Arch
... Could you please allow me to select B.Arch course as it fits the above mentioned c...
^^^^
Line 9, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...act. Thank you for your consideration Yours faithfully Manjyot
^^^^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your consideration Yours faithfully Manjyot
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, therefore, as to, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 699.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72297297297 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70940890969 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3340773756 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.375 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256047597628 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108408670951 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900623995986 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166927258684 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662977602159 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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