Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
• Give details of how you and your friends and family use the centre.
• Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the community.
• Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre close.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Tran Thanh Tung. I am a resident of Khuong Dinh ward, Thanh Xuan District. I am writing to you regarding the problem related to The Sports and Leisure Centre in my ward named "Hoa Mai Centre." Please allow me to elaborate on the details.
I have heard about a plan in which district authorities would stop the centre's operation to save money. After discussing with some other residents, on behalf of them, I write this letter to you to request keeping the centre open with a new policy suggested. As you know, "Hoa Mai Centre" plays an essential role in our daily life, with over fifty households living in Khuong Dinh ward. The centre has been serving us well in leisure activities, sports for more than ten years. Many people get used to the life with their activities in the centre, therefore, letting the centre operate is needed. This is very significant for the sustainable development of our ward. To support financially for Hoa Mai Centre, I suggest that the district authority charge, instead of free as currently, for several types of sports by some methods such as selling paid tickets or issuing member paid cards. I believe that surrounding people will advocate this policy. By doing this, the saving money is solved, and resident's demands are also satisfied.
I hope you will consider my request and suggestion thoroughly, and I really appreciate any help you can provide.
Yours sincerely
Tran Thanh Tung
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... allow me to elaborate on the details. I have heard about a plan in which distri...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'centres'' or 'centre's'?
Suggestion: centres'; centre's
...ich district authorities would stop the centres operation to save money. After discussi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, regarding, so, therefore, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.916 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63866936163 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0342522034 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7857142857 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180984354309 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561668851073 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440844983062 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952594367842 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362520893293 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.