Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Other believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
It is true that there are conflicting benefits in terms of health in rural areas and urban areas. While some argue that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside, I would argue that there are health benefits of living in cities.
On one side of the argument, there are many who claim that living in remote areas would bring significant advantages to people's health for several reasons. First, people living in a village are less prone to suffer diseases like asthma, bronchitis, etc. People speculate this might be due to the fact that there is the complete absence of intense pollution with smoke, Carbon-DI-oxide, Carbon-mono-oxide, Nitrous-Oxide in regions outside urban areas. Second, by settling down in the countryside, people can decrease the rate of catching psychological problems like stress and depression. This might be explained by the fact that those who live in the modern world have to constantly make effort to get competitive to each other, but people in rural areas tend to have a tendency to compete for their jobs.
However, I would be inclined to argue again this as I believe that settling down in cities is enable to enhance people health effectively. First, people can satisfy modern amenities as well as have better social security. For instance, urban dwellers might have easy access to a wide variety of sports, gyms that following highly specialized diets that best suit their physique. Second, Cities are often home to a wide variety of health-related services, many of which could greatly aid city dwellers looking to lead a more healthy life. For example, they can readily access advanced medical services to help them recover from serious illnesses.
In conclusion, this essay supports the idea that people should stay metropolitan to enjoy a variety of utilities and the higher privileges of social welfare.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enabled'.
Suggestion: enabled
...believe that settling down in cities is enable to enhance people health effectively. F...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e higher privileges of social welfare.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11437908497 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79095107804 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562091503268 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5701316593 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.384615385 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247859184602 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813132733501 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632112406649 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137188155555 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706674177581 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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