Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity.’ How far do you share this viewpoint?
Non-profitable organizations are serving people by collecting subscriptions. To continue this process, all must support these organizations by giving a portion of funds. From my point of view, I fully support this statement.
The main aim of charities is to serve people without earning profit. By collecting lots of funds from different sectors they continue their social service policy. those people who are illiterate and can't find a job or any earning sectors. This organization gave them a small amount of loan to start a business. Moreover, they also support them by giving ideas. Other than this, by arranging short time courses, medical services they serve people. As they serve without profit and also need funds, those persons who are doing jobs or business and earning money should give at least a minimum level of subscription to these NGOs. Because the main job of this organization is to gather donations and with those donations helping others.
On the contrary, If people don't donate subscriptions to these organizations, they can't continue their social service policy. In our society, lots of families are dependent on non-profit organizations to get services, if these charities conclude their services, those families will lose their support and service.
Non-profitable organizations work as a bridge between rich and poor people. If general people miss giving donations poor people will miss the chance to get support from those charities. So, everyone should donate subscriptions to charities so that they can serve others who need help.
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Suggestion: Those
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...cy. those people who are illiterate and cant find a job or any earning sectors. This...
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...ing others. On the contrary, If people dont donate subscriptions to these organizat...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...scriptions to these organizations, they cant continue their social service policy. I...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... a bridge between rich and poor people. If general people miss giving donations po...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, at least, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33603238866 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89228117011 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546558704453 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.5687060924 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172057479823 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600266036434 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380881691783 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114145170044 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143870078318 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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