Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this contemporary era, environmental issues have been gaining grounds. While certain individuals assert that major environmental problem is the loss of particular species of plants and animals, I and some ohther demographic of the society believe that there are more important environmental problems like pollution and global warming.
It is fairly easy to comprehend why I consider that there are lot of other environmental issues are very important. This is simply because in these days the use of vehicles is increasing day by day which leads to serious problems like air pollution. As these vehicle emit carbon monoxide in the air which gives birth to serious problem of global warming. Since this gas has tendency to rise the temperature of surrounding; consequently , global warming causes many problems related to human health. Therefore, i and some other believe in latter perception.
Meanwhile, few demographics of the society are in the favour of former view pointand believe that main issue related to environment is extinction of particular species of plants and animals. It is due to that in few past years there are many species of plants and animals are found to be in their last stage. They might think that if particular species of plants qnd animals will be lost, the biodiversity will not take place. Thus, they consider it is the biggest environment problem of our time.
Conclusively, although loss of particular species of plants and animals is a serious environmental problem, I would argue that there are lot of other major environmental problems likely global warming, pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, therefore, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24324324324 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94165151054 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521235521236 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3105644515 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.166666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373398733368 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127629679352 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098193628803 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246262742461 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840328174446 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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