Obesity is an increasing public health problem in some parts of the world. Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.
Nowadays, an ever-increasing obesity is in some parts of the world. Most people can not know fully possible causes for this issue. This essay will discuss some reasons which can lead to obesity and solutions for people who are in this case to tackle this.
On the one hand, a growing body of research suggests that obesity is one of the most harmful illnesses for people. To be more precise, those who are a big fan of junk food can easily get obesity if they do not have a diet for themselves. Due to the fact that fast food can contain numerous calories in there so if they just eat and uncount calories you absorb on a daily basis it will be easy for them to get many illnesses related to obesity. Besides that, one more case they can get obesity is that they do not do any exercise, especially during Covid-19 pandemic. According to a survey of Harvard University, about 60% in total who are being obesity do not like to do exercise and are too lazy to force their body to move. They had a sedentary life before they have got obesity.
One the other hand, there are few solutions to alleviate this problem, obviously for the people who are not be in obesity. First and foremost, they have to control the calories in and out of their body every day. The best way is suggested that they need to balance between two kinds of calories. Secondly, they should practice a healthy lifestyle for themselves. They are alarmed that they should get rid of fast food and eat clean to refresh themselves. Finally, the most prominent solution to tackle not only obesity but also other illnesses is that they have to do exercise every day. It helps them to get lean and prevent any harmful illnesses from getting for you.
In conclusion, there are a plethora of reasons to explain why you are fatter day by day. Obviously, scientists also gave them a lot of solutions to solve this situation. In my opinion, the core reason is individuals who do not have an awareness about their obesity, even they know about it but they do not want to lose their weight.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...m, obviously for the people who are not be in obesity. First and foremost, they ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51474530831 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39131270869 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477211796247 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2805650696 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6315789474 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6315789474 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73684210526 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209058278218 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075197296651 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994484933096 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158103042336 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138565168121 0.056905535591 244% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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