In recent times, there has been considerable debate regarding the species those are died off due to environmental calamities. However , it is now considered normal for the words development and many people suggest that the sources should not be allocated to secure vulnerable animals. As far as I am concerned to this issue, I am on the same wavelength with them.
To kick off, the elevated integers of extinct animals are the topic of concern. Due to global warming and natural occurrences , many of the breeds such as dinosaurs, rhinos went to extinction other than these there are many species whose extension is still not reported. It is it is no disputing the fact that their disappearance is not causing any adverse effect to the hierarchy. Although , it merely triggers the food chain of animals but does not imbalance it. Therefore, this can be marginalised.
Furthermore, it is apparent that this development does not make any difference to the growth of a nation. Thus, government should not spend a significant amount on their prevention. In other words , they should invest their budget on the deadly requirements of public such as hospitals and schools. Undoubtedly , the need to pay more attention on the sources which are scarcely available. Moreover they should provide free education and medical facilities to the people who cannot afford , also install some industries to raise employement instead of splurging money on the animals those are on the edge of extinction.
To recapitulate , according to our preceding discussion , it is understandable that there are various other issues that are worth stressing . So i urge to the government to address these issues and contemplate over them. However , fewer resources and little attention can be paid to the animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16955017301 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97505503314 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59169550173 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.56163764 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169377113704 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442261378904 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409640933623 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866311240211 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599693735937 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.