Childcare training courses should be mandatory for all parents Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your own opinion and include relevant examples

Many people believe that childcare, education is significantly compulsory for all the mother and father. There are numerous of positive aspects to learn that for Childs growth and development. Moreover, this training course can certainly help to raise their kids in an appropriate way. I agree with this statement that these courses might be useful for every parent.

Firstly, every couple should have a good amount of knowledge and dedication to raise their child. Sometimes minor negligence can lead to tragic results. For example, if parents forget to vaccinate a newborn, that would be very risky for the baby’s life.
Similarly, many parents believe in some silly notions that influence them to make bad decisions. If those parents attend a training where experts share their opinions on different aspects of proper parenting, they would be highly benefited. To exemplify, my sister Priya, who became a mother a few days ago believed that her child had a problem with digestion and need medical attention. However, later it was found that the way she fed her baby was not correct. I believe that a good knowledge of childcare brings out different and positive aspects of upbringing a child.

Apparently, this is a great way to educate the people to learn more about the aspects of parenting. It may also help to make a better society, in a broad manner.

To conclude, being informed and educated parents is an important aspect to become good parents. Since parenting courses help people in so many ways, it is indeed a good idea for people to be enrolled in such courses.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00757575758 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63100290926 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2345311488 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.625 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218283906471 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675039158481 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676483917729 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130288189311 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827221070264 0.056905535591 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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