It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaur, dodo…) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Increasing in recent years, there is an number of animal species on the verge of extinction. Some people believe that it’s an undeniable process and there are no obvious actions that humans can do to avoid this. However, I am of the opinion that this may result from serious pollutants from human activities.
First of all, many species are in danger due to water pollution. In fact, more reports and articles claimed about the fact that marine creatures such as whales and turtles are poisoned and died and their population decrease yearly because of oil spills from ships and waste from factories. Also, plastic products released directly into sea is another factor as fishes can eat accidentally and consequently died because they are not able to digest. These causes are likely to cause a decrease in biology diversity.
Another reason is that overhunting can make an impact on this problem. For example, body parts of animals such as tusks from elephants are being sold in black markets for those who misbelieve that these are the symbol of wealth and health. This may increase the acts of poaching since hunters can earn a lot of money. Moreover, there are people who see hunting as a recreational activity. In other words, they see killing animals as a kind of sport and they kill not for food, which can hurt the population of the animal.
In conclusion, although many people believe that people can do nothing to improve the situation, I strongly believe that people have an enormous influence on the population of many species. Therefore, it is crucial for governments and individuals to take actions to avoid this or the loss of many creatures will be the thing that humans will witness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
Increasing in recent years, there is an number of animal species on the verge o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be the thing that humans will witness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90344827586 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53521218685 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579310344828 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2585153715 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177706474468 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578354150244 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395857622143 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108110148062 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529869084149 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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