Although sports events are very popular, violence at these events is on the increase. Why is this so? What should authorities do to prevent violence from taking place at sports events?
In the last decades, sports have been hailed as one of the most invigorating hobbies and professional careers in the world, which has also concocted a recalcitrant issue in which people clash against each other and cause chaotic hubbub and labile repercussions. The question “why is that” has been echoed recently, so has the jury of how to extenuate the problem.
Brutality and frenzy can egregiously emerge as people are always willing to fight tooth and claw against each other. The motives vary: some simply favor this athlete while others are at loggerheads with them, which later makes the former take umbrage, and results in a fistfight. Another example, the apposite profiteering of sports egg on people’s temerity for monetary wagers: if their fluke is on the ebb, they abruptly fly into a rage and exploit violence as a resolution. All these hooliganism-affiliated reactions have turned things into a chicken-and-egg situation where it is ambiguous to extrapolate whether the zealot grudges derive from their passion for sports or simply the opprobrium and wrath of frittering away a lot of money in exchange for nothing. As a result, things go south every time at the stadium.
The government, hence, needs to take action forthrightly to terminate such an ill in our society. Should they stipulate penalties and enforce more ordinances to restrain betting and physical assaults, who knows if associated authorities can earn even more for good? Moreover, more supervisors and security staff should ambush in the vicinity of all the playgrounds to fortify the safety of ordinary citizens. Better the safe than sorry, if those hysteric blokes dare do anything reckless, no one knows what would happen and whose life will be put at stake.
In conclusion, I believe this problem should be solved quickly to make sure anyone going to a sports tournament feels excited only, not perturbed. The government, other participants and spectators, and even I, we should cooperate to assure that no potential menace is to be found in places that are purported to be safe and entertaining.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1642228739 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.948644989 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656891495601 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9435704263 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.461538462 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170664330255 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495243005768 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0250961788677 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084252284614 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238030453805 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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