The car was most popular on British road in the year on 1988 because it was the first car on UK road. But after the advancement of technology and the population growth the number of vehicles is increase and according to research in 2000 there was more than 29 million cars on British road. I strongly agree the alternative mode of transportation should be encouraged and introduced the international law to overcome and control the ownership and the use of car.
Firstly, the increased of vehicles is alarming situation for our social, economical and environmental problems. Due to many cars on road it is raise the traffic and also atmosphere problems. However, it is necessary to control the increasing ratio of vehicles and government introduce alternative transporting system such as train and buses. After lunching the train or buses it will curtail the car because in train there is a exclusive space for passengers or travelers train and busses will decrease the traffic and environmental problem up to 70%.
secondly, government should introduce the international laws to reduced the ownership of cars and it's uses. Once the international law implement the ownership of vehicles will be decline. and it's ultimately advantage our social life and environmental for instance if government introduce the law that every family must be one car and they must use it for emergency situation like for long distance otherwise, peoples must use the local transport like busses or train it will increase the economy of country as well.
To conclude, the less amount of car or road is beneficial for our health, environment and our life because it will overcome many alarming situation. I think the alternative idea of the statement is better to control the everything
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rtail the car because in train there is a exclusive space for passengers or trave...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...and environmental problem up to 70%. secondly, government should introduce the intern...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ced the ownership of cars and its uses. Once the international law implement the own...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
... ownership of vehicles will be decline. and its ultimately advantage our social lif...
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Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'everything'?
Suggestion: the; everything
...a of the statement is better to control the everything
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Line 7, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ment is better to control the everything
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10652920962 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97077795597 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484536082474 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0194718902 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424321841886 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164382865522 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108369222831 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254434415643 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166487000342 0.056905535591 293% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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