The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
Summarize the information by selectin and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are the two graphs depicting the temperatures per month and the data of hours of sunshine annual in three metropolitan cities, namely London, New York and Sydney.
It is conspicuous that the average monthly temperatures have a high Celsius from June to September compare to other month in London and New York, while the reverse is true for Sydney. Besides, the number of hour of sunshine is receiving in New York per year.
When it comes to the first line graph, in January the figure of temperatures is about 5 Celsius and 9 Celsius in London and New York, respectively which share the same increasing trend in the temperature in these after years and reach nearly 12 Celsius in April. Additionally, in London and New York receive the higher temperature after 3 months and hit the zenith at 30 Celsius for the latter city and 22 Celsius for the former and follow by a lower temperatures at the last months. On the contrary, regarding to Sydney, over 25 Celsius is recorded in January and it follows by a plunge in temperature and hit the nadir of 15 Celcius in July and then it increase in the after years.
In terms of the hour of sunshine per year, the highest hours belong to New York with 2525 and the second rank is Sydney consists of 2473 hours. Strikingly, a lowest hour with 1180 is London which a far lower than the two cities before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the two graphs depicting the temperatur...
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Line 3, column 655, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...nadir of 15 Celcius in July and then it increase in the after years. In terms of the ho...
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Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ney consists of 2473 hours. Strikingly, a lowest hour with 1180 is London which a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, regarding, second, then, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54918032787 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55019483265 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2811099761 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.75 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193139361575 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103422795331 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574766385516 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143612200482 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465199947662 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.