Taking part in sports is important for an adult's health and happiness. To what extent do you agree with it?
Recently, the phenomenon of taking part in sports and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matters of an adult's health are highly beneficial, such an issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to conceive that happiness can be a plus, and I will investigate that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, taking part in sports events can provide society with noticeable effects, which are rooted in the fact that merits, as well as the advantages of sufficient happiness, are considerable. According to my own experience, I performed an academic experiment that discovered the importance of a healthy lifestyle. Thus, beneficial ramifications of responsible adults are visible.
From a scientific point of view, taking part in physical activities can supply the community with negative impacts that are associated with the reality that important activities are remarkable. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by an elite university described weak adults. Hence, predicted outcomes of insufficient happiness are crucial.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of taking part in sports far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of energetic persons prove the significance of social happiness, but also pinpoint possible implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...ontested by many that the matters of an adults health are highly beneficial, such an i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65315315315 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22851070766 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644144144144 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6043224959 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.090909091 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301423779779 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868941382624 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041565835054 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157312084758 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310385187062 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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