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The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola.
The pie chart compares the proportion of the global sales of Coca-Cola in 2000, while the line graph illustrates the share price of Coca-Cola from 1996 to 2001.
Overall, it is clear from the pie chart that the proportion of sales of Coca-Cola in North America is largest compared to other regions in 2000. And from the line graph, although there is a fluctuation in share prices for Coca-Cola, it increases over the period of time.
In 2000, the total global sales of Coca-Cola stood at 17.1 billion. Regarding pie chart, while the largest proportion of Coca-Cola sales was in Northern Americ...
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