The pie chart and graph give information about the data of sales volume and share price for Coca-Cola brand, whereas the cart illustrates Coca-Cola’s unit case volume as the percentage of total by region 2000, the graph shows share price for brand from 1996 to 2001.
To begin with, it can be clearly seen that, according to the chart, there are four area listed for bottles sold in 2000. Approximately half of total sales were in the Americas in 2000 followed by Europe’s sales, which had 20.5% sales volume of total. Africa-Middle East and Asia had nearly a quarter of total sales as 7% and 16.4%, respectively.
To continue with, when it comes to the share prices for Coca-Cola, there is a fluctuation in the given period of time. The share price peaked in 1998 at 80$ and hitted the lowest point in 1996 at about 35$. Although at the end of the period share price had more than at the beginning, it reached at around 60$.
In conclusion, the American Continent was the largest market for Coca-Cola in 2000 and despite price changed every year, average of it nearly 60$.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...la, there is a fluctuation in the given period of time. The share price peaked in 1998 at 80$ ...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$80'.
Suggestion: $80
...time. The share price peaked in 1998 at 80$ and hitted the lowest point in 1996 at ...
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Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$35'.
Suggestion: $35
...itted the lowest point in 1996 at about 35$. Although at the end of the period shar...
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Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$60'.
Suggestion: $60
... at the beginning, it reached at around 60$. In conclusion, the American Contine...
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Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$60'.
Suggestion: $60
...hanged every year, average of it nearly 60$.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69109947644 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47776217419 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586387434555 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9998553239 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.454367670911 0.215688989381 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168761628986 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156078802893 0.0843802449381 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255923814673 0.15604864568 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172016662244 0.0819641961636 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.