Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the contemporary society, more people suffer from different forms of pressure ranging from acdemics, competition in the work field, conflicts between peers and so on. Therfore, the modern generation needs to figure out new methods to help them relaese the accompanied stress caused by the aforementioned factors. Although some peole argue that it is the best way to reduce stress when people aline, I, on the other hand, contend that the most suitable way of relieving pressure is to seek the company with your friend and family members for the following reasons.
To commence with, why peopel feel stressed out in their daily lives is because they have encountered strawbacks and challenging tasks without additional support from other people. If those who are under pressure are willing to spend time with each other, their friends can not only provide useful suggestions to deal with the challenges but also serve as a mentor to provide the most neededd mental support. Under the circumstances, stress may soon disappear and be diminished to a large extent, and people will not be in a high risk of getting depression and other mental problems.
Secondly, spending time with each other also give people a new perspective in their bustling lives. For those who are swarmed with the challenging tasks and competition in the work field, they may tend to fall into the situation of perfectionism without listening to other people's opinions. If that happens, the stressed people will not have a good performance because they may have a higher inclination to neglect the details which are actually helpful and useful. In other words, they will not fall into the vicious circle of being stressed out again since they have had a comprehensive viewpoints to analyze everything objectively.
Even though spending time alno such as meditaing is good for the individual mental development, people who are stressed out could not have put themselves in a objective and serene state to relax and avoid recalling the bad memoris of stress. Chatting with each other in the nightclib, exercising with your friends, eating delicious food and complaining the trick things that people have encounted are all effective means of soothing one's mental state.
Since chemical substances released in this circumstance could alo serve as a catalyst to reconstruct your mental health, which is suggested by the scientists that the mental state is highly connected with the physical state.
In conclusion, there is no denying that people nowadays are all in a high risk of feeling depressed and even being overwhelmed by the stress. To prevent this kind of situation from deteriorating and posing more serious threat to both our mental and physical state, people need to spend time with other people for additional objective advises and enlightening perspective facilitate people to skip out of the stress zone.
- Which of the following is the best thing to do Interrupt and correct mistakes right away wait until the class or meeting over are gone say nothing 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important to read or watch news presented by people whose views are different from your own than it is to read or watch news presented by those whose views are similar to your own Use specif 84
- Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage 3
- The extended family is less important now than it was in the past 73
- tpo 55 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ons to deal with the challenges but also serve as a mentor to provide the most ne...
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...will not have a good performance because they may have a higher inclination to ne...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'viewpoint'?
Suggestion: viewpoint
...ain since they have had a comprehensive viewpoints to analyze everything objectively. ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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...ed out could not have put themselves in a objective and serene state to relax and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2431.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17234042553 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72910059191 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51914893617 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 734.4 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.5436298753 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.066666667 100.406767564 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 20.6045352989 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161163529365 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600682322982 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472782358154 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892703333745 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320027003914 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 11.7677419355 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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