Restricting air travel is the only way to fight air pollution. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays air pollution is one of the most discussed environmental problems. There is an opinion that air pollution can be stopped only by prohibiting planes. I totally disagree with this statement because there are some other causes of air pollution.
Firstly, manufacture promote air pollution a lot. This is because fossil fuels are necessary in production. Therefore, these materials are burned in process and thrown away to the air forming smoke under surrounding areas and spreading further. According to research conducted by the Russian Ministry of Natural Resources and Environment in 2019 there are about 18 million tons of hazardous materials were emitted to the atmosphere by factories. In other words, fighting with emissions from manufactures or changing fossil fuels by solar or nuclear energy can protect air from pollution.
Secondly, transport contaminates air. This means that cars need petrol to move, but it is made of oil and consists of toxic chemicals in itself. Hence, in process of burning dangerous waste appears in the air and in large amounts it can pose a threat to the environment. For example, according to chemical analysis of petrol there are at least ten different elements in itself and six of them are toxic. Thus, air pollution could be conserved by shortening transport emissions and exploitation electric cars instead of cars on flue engines.
According to the arguments presented above I can say that air pollution is a result of many different impacts and humanity will never solve this problem by combating only one of them.
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, at least, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2371541502 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8448944378 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604743083004 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8347071723 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266344601404 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985388138562 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724428069957 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17029887712 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676280861268 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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