Irrefutably, in this modern era, tv news is top of the list show,which provide the ins&outs.Sevral individuals think that brodcasting news on tv is better sources of entertainment for viewers, however rest of the masses thinking tv news should be study and information purpose.This essay shade light on the both point in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, first school of thaught is tv news is confor all types of news like some funny news daily trending on news and some debateble topic watched on tv,which make a people entertainment.Other cardinal factor which make people entertainment is daily cringe on social media.In this globalised era, journalist use hot topic buttons if,which show pupil acquire happiness.
According the tv news, other school of thaught is tv news program can provie a lots of education news and informative news for millions of individuals, due to which lots of students and off spring acquire a plethora knowledge about education and modern technology.For example,a research of oxford university, it stated that young kids will be achieved lots of thinkings power by best information sources.Other provoking factor is that tv news information aid for students, owings to educational knowledge they contribute them self to their nation.
In the final reckoning, i tend to reiterate that everything has its own significance, nothing can not be changed. Although tv news provide a entertainment to people yet it should be make a better source of education and informative.
- The crime rate will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes Do you agree or disagree 56
- In some cultures old age people are highly valued while in other cultures youth is more valued Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- Some people think that the purpose of TV news programs is to entertain viewers Others believe that news programs should be educational and informative What do you think the purpose of TV news programs is Support your opinion with reasons and examples 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32217573222 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21286606622 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594142259414 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.543468612 49.4020404114 335% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 254.4 106.682146367 238% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.8 20.7667163134 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411183175799 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213830088253 0.084324248473 254% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101557940248 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246161625504 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506705940402 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.5 13.0946893788 210% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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