the process below shows how to make dough for a pizza
The diagram illustrates which pizzas are produced to serve customers.
Overall, it can be seen that there are divided into 7 main steps which are sorted into 3 main stages. Starting from the ingredients of preparation and processing, ending within a raw flour that can be baking later.
As can be noticed that making the dough a pizza is initially taken place by mixing sort of additives, namely four cups of flour with its weighted at 500 grams, half of water at 325 grams, and two spoons of salt, and the final ingredient is poured that is one a half of dry active yeast. Then, by putting all the additives in a bottle which is a stand mixer, then the mixer of the machine will execute its task within 2 minutes slowly. Next, accelerate up to 5 minutes at medium level to blend all additives.
After a long period of time, the machine will return in a slow state within 2 minutes. Following this process, the dough is letting down in 2 hours which may be upsizing in a double itself. By individual’s hand, all air bubbles will removing in working the dough. Ultimately, cut up into 3 equal pieces with its chunks about 275 grams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...l to blend all additives. After a long period of time, the machine will return in a slow stat...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 233, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'remove'
Suggestion: remove
...individual’s hand, all air bubbles will removing in working the dough. Ultimately, cut u...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, then, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52912621359 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47460949408 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640776699029 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.367379294 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0930760958114 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033733539028 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428641696826 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551168881348 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032613889345 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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