It is more important to read and watch news presented by people whose opinion is different from your own view than by people whose opinion are similar to yours.
Most people in the world agree that a person can not know every thing. Personally I believe that it is important to listen to other people who do not share our point of view. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, by listening to people with different ideas, we can find solutions to our problems that we could not think of. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. When I wanted to study PHD, I was of the opinion to study in my out country. I thought studying abroad is hard and does not hold any benefits. I consulted with one of my friends. He was of the opinion that studying abroad is much better. At first I did not agree with him but when he explained his reasons I understood that my first thought's were wrong, as a result I decided to continue my studies in another country. Had I not asked of someone with different opinion than mine, I would have wasted my opportunity.
Furthermore, it does not matter how knowledgeable we are, we can not understand everything. If we listen to the people with different point of view we can learn new things. For instance a few years ago when I was a university student I read a news about possibility of house cost rising. I was of the opinion that the price wont change but the newspaper pointed out an economical fact that I knew nothing about, after that I studied about what the new paper hand mentioned I realized my original opinion was wrong. As a result I bought a house much earlier than I intended which caused me to save money.In conclusion, I strongly feel that listening to other people with different point of view is very beneficial. This is because this will provide us whit new solutions and, we might learn new things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... intended which caused me to save money.In conclusion, I strongly feel that listen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45820433437 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59528791594 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532507739938 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9601241762 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7058823529 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150903151487 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050403153886 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467097025578 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106126944524 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156198003866 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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