Some people feel that education should be provided exclusively by the state, and private education should be prohibited.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Pedagogy has long been a bone of contention among parents as their standpoints about it vary differently. While some people propose the state provide exclusive education for citizens, others gravitate towards private lessons. In my estimation, both approaches have their merits and minuses, making it hard to abolish each.
There are some justified reasons parents can adduce for public schools run by the state. More students will attend these institutions, which catalyzes daily conversations amid diverse genders and nationalities. Co-ed schools like these undeniably help students interact better with each other. Moreover, the state might also execute policies to enhance curriculum activities and soft skills of pupils, instigating an escalation in their ability to fend for themselves. Last but not least, the tuition fee will also be more affordable. The decline in money invested can provide every student from any background education parity.
In terms of home tutorials, multitudes of benefits have been enumerated. Should children fail to grasp anything at school and are not brave enough to raise questions, tutors at their disposal will illuminate them. This, hence, fortifies their knowledge of the subject. What’s more, adolescents will learn more profoundly and comprehensively as their private preceptors center solely on specific topics, minimizing the chance of superficiality in absorption. Self-educating at home helps avoid some inevitable issues, too. Incapacitated and disabled kids are a case in point. For fear of marginalization or mockery posed by their peers, they choose to receive home education; there should be no criticism towards their choice.
In conclusion, parents should weigh up pros and cons when it comes to deciding which approach their children follow as each individual has their interests and predilections.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68817204301 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97291896899 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695340501792 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7433800698 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3529411765 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4117647059 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.29411764706 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170151805863 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050977994837 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591815592569 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946626696518 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353831646519 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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