The represented line graph illustrates information about how the expenses of food and oil altered from 2000 to 2011.
Overall, it is clear that both figures showed great growth and the food price index surpassed the total oil cost at the end of the year.
In 2000, the price of oil was around 90 per barrel, placed higher than that of the food, which was just under 90 points. In the next seven years, a gradual increase with some little fluctuations was witnessed in both oil and food expenses, more in oil price in 2006 and 2007, and reached around 139 per barrel and 138 points respectively.
Significant changes were experienced in both after the year 2007. Between 2008 and 2009, they hit the highest prices for the first time, at 230 per barrel in oil and just over 220 points in the food. However, they showed a sharp downward trend, declined to around 118 per barrel in the oil price and almost 140 points in the food costs. After two years, they increased dramatically and climbed to approximately 240 in the food, which was the highest points, and to over the 180 per barrel in oil.
- Experts say that if older people exercise daily they will be healthier and happier However many still suffer from a lack of fitness What are the reasons for this What actions can be taken to solve this problem 61
- Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in childhood obesity while others think it is the fault of the parents Discuss both sides and give your opinion 78
- Cultures in different countries are more similar today than they used to be What are the reasons for this Is this a positive or negative development 73
- These days many of us prefer to throw damaged things away whereas in the past people used to repair damaged items and keep them for a long time Explain why you think this change has happened What are the effects of this change in attitude 67
- Shopping has become a favorite pastime among young people Why do you think it is like that and do you think they must be encouraged to do other things rather than shopping
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58375634518 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34037128057 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56345177665 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9867165444 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.875 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325117556191 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145688052022 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577542571298 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201402098159 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335278943588 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.96 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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