1. The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
In the past few decades machines have evolved drastically from automatic room cleaning machine to self learning cars. lots of inventions are being made in various fields. Scientists have made various discoveries and added these ideas into making new machines which comfort humans. In the past decade, the machines which are developed were not even imaginable in the past. The sole reason behind all these inventions is the human brain. I would like to agree to the statement that human mind is superior to machines as machines are only tools of human minds.
machines are brought to life by humans. Initially these are designed, then implemented and tested before they are available to other people. machines are made from scratch by us. Though one may think that machines and technologies like Artifical intelligence are intelligent than humans but we are the ones who have created those.
For instance, self talking robot or auto driving car may seem superior than humans. however people have put lot of research and effort to design and manufacture these machines. it took several years to develop that idea into a machine.it is solely the effort of human brain to create those machines.
machines always obey and perform the tasks given by humans. they donot have their own brain and donot take any actions or their own. consider self driving car which seams very intelligent but it doesnot drive until approved or self driving mode enabled by his owner. machines do not have any ability to think and execute. To sum up they rely on humans to perfform their tasks and their only motive is to do work given by their owners.
machines do not have the ability to think and do not have any feelings. so they cannot think and take any decisions on their own but rely on humans. For instance consider sophia the talking robot it cannot talk or do any work itself untill a human turns it on. it does not have any feelings and emotions to consider and perform actions accordingly. consider all these reasons machines are considered inferior to humans.
To conclude humans are the key reason for machines to work. so humans are always at a higher level compared to machines. however there may be instances that machines outperform humans like making fast and tedious calculations, creating 3d models easily. but these machines do not perform until they are instructed by people. machines are just tools to ease the work performed by people. so humans are considered superior than machines.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, may, so, then, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 421.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93349168646 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42853869032 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472684085511 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.292392 60.3974514979 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.6206896552 118.986275619 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5172413793 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.37931034483 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.83258426966 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342847009244 0.243740707755 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100686347182 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107770468881 0.0758088955206 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185932821525 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124754089535 0.0667264976115 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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