The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
With the rapid technological advancement of Computer Science and Artificial Intelligence, it is natural for people to wonder if machines will supplant humans in the near future. Some even fear that the accurate, diligent and efficient machines will soon take over the job market, skyrocketing unemployment. However, others, including the given prompt, maintain that these inventions will only facilitate the improvement of human beings’ quality of life in the near future where humans and machines coexist. While machines can become better than some humans in a particular area, I believe that that machines support rather than compete with mankind and humanity’s mental capabilities will continue to remain exceptional.
Unlike humans, machines are usually created with a specific purpose in mind. Thus, they are more likely to excel in their goal than humans, whose role in life is multifaceted. Moreover, while a machine may start serving its purpose as soon as it is created, humans require a significant time after their birth to figure out their purpose. For instance, certain supercomputers have been known to beat even the chess-masters-the finest player among all humans. However, the same supercomputer might be unable to beat the same chess master in a running race- as it might not have the mental capacities required for running such as vision and precise movement. In contrast, a majority of humans have developed such capacities in a stage as early as infancy. Thus, even though certain machines are proficient at a specific task, the variety of mental capacities that human beings possess is unmatchable.
Moreover, as machines are made by humans, the capabilities of machines are limited to the resources of their creators, which is scarce compared to the combined mind of humanity as a whole. Human knowledge is ever evolving with new research advancements and creations emerging every single day. Continuous learning is a natural process for human beings. Machines on the other hand, are mostly limited to the initial functionality or instructions provided to them. Even the machines capable of learning are restricted to the information provided to them. For instance, the cutting edge language processing model, Chat GPT, though able to help humans in a myriad of day to day tasks, is unable to provide information regarding even the most well-known event after 2021. Therefore, the unlimited learning potential of human minds which continuously adapts and innovates is unparalleled.
In additional to logic and reasoning, human mind also exhibits unique capabilities of emotions, philosophy and ethics. For example, human beings have the ability to experience joy at the smell of rain or the sorrow at the loss of a loved one, which might just seem bizarre to a machine. Similarly, they ponder at several philosophical and ethical questions like “What is the meaning of life?” and “What brings value to life?”; Such abstract concepts are incomprehensible to machines, who are designed with a specific purpose in mind. Even with the attempt of brilliant professionals, breaking down those concepts to logical components is simply not possible. Hence, with the ability to comprehend abstract concepts and experience complex emotions, human mind are far more complex than machines.
Being designed with a specific purpose, machines have several advanced capacities which allow them to greatly increase ease and convenience of human life. In the tasks they are designed to perform, their ability might sometimes surpass humans. However, with the variety of mental capacity, continuous learning ability, and capacity to experience complex emotions, as well as comprehend abstruse topics, make the human mind much more incredible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'remain'.
Suggestion: remain
...and humanity’s mental capabilities will continue to remain exceptional. Unlike humans, machines...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'chess-masters-the the finest'.
Suggestion: chess-masters-the the finest
...puters have been known to beat even the chess-masters-the finest player among all humans. However, the s...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., though able to help humans in a myriad of day to day tasks, is unable to provid...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke the human mind much more incredible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3189.0 2235.4752809 143% => OK
No of words: 586.0 442.535393258 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44197952218 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92010537223 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92147628852 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 301.0 215.323595506 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513651877133 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 1017.0 704.065955056 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4237803003 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.653846154 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278737077288 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844532735762 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538277744264 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168128018224 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435367550769 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 166.0 100.480337079 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.