Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Technology makes many things easier, one of those is communications. Nowadays, we have phone, email, social networking which connect us to other people rapidly. To hand-writing letters, my point is that there is no longer much room for hand-writing letters in modern life.
First and for most, online-communications are so quick and convenient for people to use. In the past, family members lived far away had to wait for weeks to hear from each other. But now, we just need a second to send a message on our phones. Thanks to Internet, although I am living abroad, I talk to my parents every day, I even know what they have for lunch, for dinner.... Online-communications absolutely make the world smaller. It is nature result that they have replaced conventional communicating methods
However, some nostalgic people still want to keep the good old days with hand writing letters, they feel that letters contain much more "love" than those messages on screens. So they keep writing letters, cards etc. Thus, hand-writing letters still have a tiny room to exist with those people. Anyway, not many people can keep this habit. In addition, it is not how we write to each other, it is how we care about each other that show our love.
In conclusion, online- communications are doing a great job in connecting people. People have a lot of sweet memories with hand-writing letters but people always move forward and leave the past behind. It is sad but true that hand-writing letters have been disappearing from our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'phoned'.
Suggestion: phoned
...se is communications. Nowadays, we have phone, email, social networking which connect...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, thus, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98443579767 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04378162488 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618677042802 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.8084254209 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0625 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175230246322 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05747881288 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533823797138 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112401622142 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368053690238 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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