It is a global trend that youngsters have moved away from their own homes after completion of schooling with friends or they live alone. This is a positive effect not only on the youngsters but also on the parents and society in terms of financial and self-reliance.
It is better to have self-sufficient and independent nature for every young people to succeed in life circumstances. Children who stayed away from their parent's homes would have self-conscious and optimistic about their carrier choice. If they are aware of new situations they became futuristic and find the way to overcome crises related to self and home care needs and financial problems. For instance, they would try to do part-time or full-time jobs, share household chores, and earn and save money instead of their childish behaviour. Likewise, it would improve youngsters social development and bonding with other people than the family members. Joint with peer groups may enrich their ideas and enhance new startups for a bright future. Overprotection and care from parents may mitigate the chance for survival to be independent.
However, youth are becoming more addicted to harmful drugs and chance to involve in dangerous situations. Youngsters who live far from their parents control such chances are higher than anything. Peer pressure and collaboration with strangers would lead to the situation more worst. For example, many college students who live outside with other friends often mingled with anonymous groups for money, drugs and malpractice. People who have guidance from their parent's homes may decline the chance to go for further harmful conditions.
To sum up, it would be negative elements if young people who live away from parents home. Nevertheless, the overall outcome would be beneficial to the children and their parents in a more dominant way to the core.
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- The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch two cities in New Zealand and London and Edinburgh two cities in the United Kingdom 71
- Some people think personal happiness is directly related to economic success while others believe this depends on other factors Discuss both sides and give your own opinion 78
- Some people think that in this modern world getting old is entirely bad However other people believe that the life of old people is much better now than it was in the past Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'worst' (without 'more') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: worst
...h strangers would lead to the situation more worst. For example, many college students who...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, may, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23745819398 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7513194521 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555183946488 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.4831874672 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323678192038 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10518344361 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621416342972 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208018411142 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377545833487 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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