Some people believe that eighteen years old is the appropriate age to finish school while others disagree
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is thought by some people that eighteen-year-old-students can finish study while others disagree. From my point of view, continuing school after eighteen should be a selection for students to choose, not a compulsory one.
To begin with, the eighteens are able to stop their study to start a new life. There are many ways to choose after graduating. For instance, they can become a teacher in a small village to bring necessary knowledge to the homelessness, poor children, … Or, they want to be a farmer at their hometown, grow vegetables, raise cows, … The reason is they can not pay for fees in university.
However, some people have another way of thinking. They claim that eight years old must continue their study in universities. These parents suppose their boys and girls have a more modern future, get a famous job with huge salaries. For example, my friend’s father targets him to pass the top university in Vietnam since he was a little kid. Thus, his father’s target became his target. Studying in universities helps students get access to enormous knowledge, learn more about each platform. Therefore, they have an opportunity to work in famous companies such as Google, Apple, Facebook, … Thanks to these students, our life quality is more and more modern, convenient.
In conclusion, both two opinions have their own reason, hence continuing school after eighteen should be a selection for students.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09745762712 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99905124804 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673728813559 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4985464185 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5384615385 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154469207563 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608678316572 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933154635115 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121978587255 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104162682322 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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