The pie chart illustrates what did the anthropology graduates after ending up their education at one university, as well as the table shows the proportion of each three job sectors in four salary groups.
Overall, most of the graduation has a job the half more than of which has the full-time job. The most proportion for the lowest salary is seen in private companies, while 70% of the top salary is for Freelance consultants and Government sectors. The full-time work is responsible for 52% of the whole, followed by the part-time work (15%.) The postcard study in part-time and full-time make up 13% which the former is lower than the latter by a margin of 3%. The 12% of all graduates are unemployed, and also there is no occupation information of remaining.
At the first glance at the table, the share of private companies employment for the two lowest salaries is more than two other types of employment by a margin of 50% for 25000-49999, and more than 50% for 50000-74999. In contrast, freelance consultants and government sector employment have more share in two top salaries in comparison with private companies, and also the share of the latter in 75000-99999 salary group is more than the former, whereas, in +100000 salary group the proportion of the former is more than the latter, in both above-mentioned, the disparity is one-tenth.
- The line charts show the amount of beer sold to pubs and supermarkets over six years where a bar graph displays the amount of pubs closed over the same period Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relev 67
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both view and give your opinion 95
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 73
- The charts below show the changes in ownership of the electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compari 11
- The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 338, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...le, followed by the part-time work 15%. The postcard study in part-time and full-ti...
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Line 2, column 457, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ower than the latter by a margin of 3%. The 12% of all graduates are unemployed, an...
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...ance at the table, the share of private companies employment for the two lowest salaries ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, well, whereas, while, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89519650655 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91703056769 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480349344978 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.4473713572 43.030603864 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.125 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147137239377 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702378942739 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102056961083 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145451047684 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135204453554 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.