Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise,pollution and airport construction.One reason for this is the growth in low cost passenger flights often to holiday destination.
Some people say that government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily.Do you agree or disagree?
Although,due to some cause of air traffic like high noise,taint and construction of airport because of augmentation of low cost flight,therefore,people oftenly travel through airlines for holiday destination.I totally disagree with the people who argur that the air traffic alleviate through increasing taxing.
First of all,when government increase the cost of air travelling by applying hugh taxes it becomes problematic for the people who come from middle-class families ,they are not afford the price of the ticket and due tobthat there the chancess of increasing the gap between common and rich people.Although it is also affecting governments because of they do not get proper amount of tge income from the air transportation,thus it is awful impact on the economy of the countries,so that they are not able to get improvement in the airport system or facilities for instance,comfertable amenity to the travellers.
Soundly,tax augmentation also affecting the airline by declining thevtravellers because people who are not capable to get ticket is decrease tbe use of airlines and ultimately popularity of travelling by the plane is dimnish.Hence the air service not obtain adequate amount of earning so there are the possibility to people travelling rate through the air transportation is reduce.Therefore some airline corporations loss in the business and sell their company to other like government companies sold out to the privet one.
In conclusion,increasing the taxes is not a flawless idea to reduce the traffic,whereas it creat problems not only for common people but also on the government and airline companies
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- Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise pollution and airport construction One reason for this is the growth in low cost passenger flights often to holiday destination Some people say that government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it 47
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , due
Although,due to some cause of air traffic like high ...
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Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , taint
...ome cause of air traffic like high noise,taint and construction of airport because of ...
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Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , therefore
...cause of augmentation of low cost flight,therefore,people oftenly travel through airlines ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...hrough airlines for holiday destination.I totally disagree with the people who ar...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , when
...rough increasing taxing. First of all,when government increase the cost of air tra...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ople who come from middle-class families ,they are not afford the price of the tic...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'afforded'.
Suggestion: afforded
...rom middle-class families ,they are not afford the price of the ticket and due tobthat...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
... the gap between common and rich people.Although it is also affecting governments becaus...
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Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...though it is also affecting governments because of they do not get proper amount of tge income ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , thus
...f tge income from the air transportation,thus it is awful impact on the economy of th...
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Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...l impact on the economy of the countries,so that they are not able to get improveme...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , comfertable
...irport system or facilities for instance,comfertable amenity to the travellers. Soundly,t...
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Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , tax
...le amenity to the travellers. Soundly,tax augmentation also affecting the airline...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...y of travelling by the plane is dimnish.Hence the air service not obtain adequate amo...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...y of travelling by the plane is dimnish.Hence the air service not obtain adequate amo...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
... rate through the air transportation is reduce.Therefore some airline corporations los...
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Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...hrough the air transportation is reduce.Therefore some airline corporations loss in the b...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...hrough the air transportation is reduce.Therefore some airline corporations loss in the b...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'corporations'' or 'corporation's'?
Suggestion: corporations'; corporation's
...tation is reduce.Therefore some airline corporations loss in the business and sell their com...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , increasing
... out to the privet one. In conclusion,increasing the taxes is not a flawless idea to red...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , whereas
...ot a flawless idea to reduce the traffic,whereas it creat problems not only for common p...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52589641434 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.70669120504 2.80592935109 132% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541832669323 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 169.065815587 49.4020404114 342% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 346.75 106.682146367 325% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.75 20.7667163134 302% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.0 7.06120827912 340% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309246659456 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19921029305 0.084324248473 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845101890149 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19921029305 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845101890149 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.0 13.0946893788 275% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.09 50.2224549098 0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.7 11.3001002004 254% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.8 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , due
Although,due to some cause of air traffic like high ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , taint
...ome cause of air traffic like high noise,taint and construction of airport because of ...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , therefore
...cause of augmentation of low cost flight,therefore,people oftenly travel through airlines ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...hrough airlines for holiday destination.I totally disagree with the people who ar...
^
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , when
...rough increasing taxing. First of all,when government increase the cost of air tra...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ople who come from middle-class families ,they are not afford the price of the tic...
^^
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'afforded'.
Suggestion: afforded
...rom middle-class families ,they are not afford the price of the ticket and due tobthat...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
... the gap between common and rich people.Although it is also affecting governments becaus...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...though it is also affecting governments because of they do not get proper amount of tge income ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , thus
...f tge income from the air transportation,thus it is awful impact on the economy of th...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...l impact on the economy of the countries,so that they are not able to get improveme...
^^^
Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , comfertable
...irport system or facilities for instance,comfertable amenity to the travellers. Soundly,t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , tax
...le amenity to the travellers. Soundly,tax augmentation also affecting the airline...
^^^^
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...y of travelling by the plane is dimnish.Hence the air service not obtain adequate amo...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...y of travelling by the plane is dimnish.Hence the air service not obtain adequate amo...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
... rate through the air transportation is reduce.Therefore some airline corporations los...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...hrough the air transportation is reduce.Therefore some airline corporations loss in the b...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...hrough the air transportation is reduce.Therefore some airline corporations loss in the b...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'corporations'' or 'corporation's'?
Suggestion: corporations'; corporation's
...tation is reduce.Therefore some airline corporations loss in the business and sell their com...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , increasing
... out to the privet one. In conclusion,increasing the taxes is not a flawless idea to red...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , whereas
...ot a flawless idea to reduce the traffic,whereas it creat problems not only for common p...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52589641434 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.70669120504 2.80592935109 132% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541832669323 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 169.065815587 49.4020404114 342% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 346.75 106.682146367 325% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.75 20.7667163134 302% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.0 7.06120827912 340% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309246659456 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19921029305 0.084324248473 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845101890149 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19921029305 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845101890149 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.0 13.0946893788 275% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.09 50.2224549098 0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.7 11.3001002004 254% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.8 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.