Most people know that money is the best tool which supports our life. Don’t have money, that means we can’t do anything. People actually need a reason to do the things they do.But the motives of some people for work are not the same. So I partly agree with this statement.
Some people have the basics of finance. The main motive for their work is to accumulate experience and satisfy their passion. They do not have any pressure about cost of living, pay for bills, education fees for children, healthcare cost and so on. So they can find a job with criteria that work in accordance with their ability and discover what they really want. In Spite of money, they only focus on the value this work brings to them. So with this sort of person, money is not the first motto for their work.
Some other people who have pressure on the cost of living. Without further ado, they start work since there is a lot to cover.They only know how to make their family fulfilled without thinking about which they want and what job they really want to work. Because they know only 30% of them have a job and a stable income to support themselves and their family. So for them, passion in work is not as important as money.
In Conclusion, depending on how people are, they can have different purposes to find a job. Working for money or passion now are not important. So every decision should be respected.
- In some countries the difference in age between parents and children is greater than in the past Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages
- Some people think students should be educated about human sexuality and reproduction in secondary Others think that taking about sexuality and reproduction will make young people more likely to have sex What is your opinion and why 67
- In some countries the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 56
- Nowasday In some countries the age gap between parents and children is greater than in the past Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
- An interesting place I have been to 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
... need a reason to do the things they do.But the motives of some people for work are...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...tart work since there is a lot to cover.They only know how to make their family fulf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, really, so, in conclusion, sort of, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51181102362 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18567416472 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527559055118 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8661085583 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4117647059 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313144095688 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121315027616 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101375009243 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225081134507 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109634651465 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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