Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made the world a better place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Some people might contend that modern technology has led us in a bad way throughout human history, since we have destroyed a large number of forests and discharged harmful emissions using technology throughout our history. However, I believe that advanced technology overwhelms its disadvantages in terms of access to information and communication, which it absolutely contributes to us greatly. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, modern technology has enabled us to access information easily. In the past, people had to search for paper books, and it arguably took a long time compared to now. On the other hand, when it comes to searching for information, we can search the internet, which contains a vast amount of information. One cannot deny that the internet has made our lives great, and people cannot live without it. However, if we use it correctly, the internet is a valuable resource, and humans can advance more and more.
Secondly, social networks have facilitated our communication. People nowadays use smartphones to call or chat with people, and we do not need to meet in person. Some people might contend that smartphones decrease our social opportunities compared to the past. But I assert that our communication opportunities have increased, and we can chat with people around the world. Not only mere communications, but in the business area, people can work together without thinking about boundaries. It benefits our economy and countries' relationships.
In conclusion, modern technology allows us to get access to a vast amount of information and more communication opportunities than ever before. Therefore, I definitely agree that technology has made our world a better place to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a bad way" with adverb for "bad"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... human history, since we have destroyed a large number of forests and discharged harmful emission...
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Suggestion:
...will explore in the following essay. To begin with, modern technology has ena...
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...e, and humans can advance more and more. Secondly, social networks have facilitat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 15.1003584229 7% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 285.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30526315789 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1278610787 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568421052632 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4679748621 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149480483165 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576215809711 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832269855383 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104310978376 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598254179534 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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