You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter,
» explain why you were at the restaurant
» describe the problems
» write about the action you want the manager to take
Write at least 150 words.
Respected sir/madam,
I the undersigned,i am an costumer of your hotel visited last night would like to bring to your kind notice about the dinner which as disappointed .I am writing this letter to convey my opinion in this regard.
I have visited to the restaurant on the special occasion of my husband birthday,as this was very special day for us to celebrate.The hotel was choosen by the reviews which are provided online and also because it was near to my home.Another reason for me selecting this hotel is because of it's food quality described by one of my close friend who had also visited recently .
In the above,as i mentioned about the dinner which was not to the level of satisfaction.I have thougt it would be more better than it was .The starter was bit spicy and even not cooked properly,rice was mixed with lot of spices,and even desert we have ordered was not the taste we expected. it was really an unpredicted meal from your restaurant.
In this regard, I strongly belive that management should appoint experienced chef's in order to improve the quality of food ,hence it relates with the reputation of the hotel.
Yours faithfully,
James bond.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95024875622 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76651186217 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616915422886 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 16.3608247423 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.23838277 44.8134815571 273% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.833333333 76.5299724578 217% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 33.5 16.8248392259 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 2.54639175258 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112312925545 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654733145665 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368689225865 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0527645388688 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457989910087 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 8.37731958763 222% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 8.62886597938 319% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 8.54432989691 178% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.