Many criminals commit further crime as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?
It is true that crime rates have been accelerating significantly these days, especially many offenders tend to turn back to crimes after being released from jails and pose a major threat to the society. This state of affairs can be attributed to several factors and this essay will suggest several viable solutions to remedy this situation.
There are two main contributors to the recidivism of criminals. Chief of these is that with criminal records drastically reducing their employment opportunities, convicts have to struggle to find a job. For example, most employers would refuse to recruit ex-prisoners because they suppose that these inmates are unreliable, they may continue involving illegal activities and cause loss to the company. Added to this is the fact that there is a lot of stigma attached to convicted people. Many do not accept criminals to reside in their communities and treat them with suspicion and apathy, which would make lawbreakers suffer extreme hardship to earn their livelihood and integrate into the community; therefore, they are likely to be lured into social evils again.
The problems of culprits committing unlawful actions can be addressed in a number of ways. The governments should implement rehabilitation programs for the offenders to recoup. These could range from providing prisoners with education of vocational training during their life imprisonment to conducting counseling sessions with psychological therapists for criminals, both of which are necessary for their reformation and personality development. In addition, authorities need to facilitate the lawbreakers to do more community services. These activities not only give convicts a chance to repay the community, but also attach themselves to the society, hence people could partly change their mindset and attitude towards inmates in a much better way.
In conclusion, the causes of escalating committing crime rate of ex-prisoners are unemployment and the society stigma of lawbreakers, and the solutions lie in applying efficacious rehabilitation programs and encouraging doing more community services
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...educing their employment opportunities, convicts have to struggle to find a job....
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Line 2, column 444, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun stigma seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of stigmas', 'a lot of stigmata'.
Suggestion: a lot of stigmas; a lot of stigmata
...Added to this is the fact that there is a lot of stigma attached to convicted people. Many do n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.615625 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06867839784 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621875 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8350953258 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.230769231 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189341928024 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568516590117 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475184740291 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118698316904 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454841988619 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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