Smoking should be banned in public places what is your opinion?
The prohibition of smoking has affected economic crisis. However, this movement improve public health. How does a smoking ban affect the economy country?
First of all, one negative impact of Banning smoking is economic loss. Similarly, the boycott of smoking cigarettes might harm the profits of any cigarette companies, and this causes the tobacco industries to reduce cigarette production due to lower demand from smokers. Furthermore, it cause some business experience a decline in sales or employment. For instance, the declaration of a smoking ban in India in 2021 suddenly experienced bankruptcy and shut down for Sampoerna tobacco factories, and this negatively influences the economic crisis for the country because of the largest state revenue from cigarette company taxes.
However, this prohibition significantly to reduces several health related issues. Many diseases such as lung cancers and asthma for smoker and second-hand smoke due to increasing rates of the people smoking cigarattes. What makes secondhand smoke dangerous? All smoke from burning nicotine products contains harmful chemicals . Even nonsmokers inhaling other people’s smoke breathe in these toxins. It has more harmful toxins than mainstream smoke that someone breathes out. If people avoid to smoke the people around them more likely to be healthier.
For instance, 30% teenagers aged 17 year old in Indonesia prefer to not smoke that cause the rate of the disease of people decreased. In conclusion, I agree that the government should take a solution to proscribe the smoking so that the people will lead a healthy life. Nevertheless, smoking bans can have important distributional effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, similarly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54474708171 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84107469567 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661478599222 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.9832733317 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8235294118 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229853304786 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792952689074 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475208020803 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141694674341 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031889137941 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.26 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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