Many Offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishments.
Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle these problems.
An increasing number of recidivists has become a serious problem nowdays. After running their punishment, a lot of criminals commit to several crimes again. This essay, I will give reasons why this phenomenon is happened as well as provide solution to tackle this condition.
Poverty is the main consideration why people tend to do crimes many times. By being poor in the society, individuals are often struggle to meet their basic needs every day. In most case, when people steal something, for instance, it is necessarily because the situation of being starving force them to do so. Second or even the most important, is the education background. Less educated people are incapable to decide what is wrong and what is right because of the inadequacy of knowledge. Therefore, The more poor and less educated people are living in a region, the higher the chance of criminal acts is.
Despite of this appeal, there are several actions that can be taken by government to deal with this circumtance. First and foremost, is financial support. By separating some percentage of national income for these marginal individuals, will help them to fulfill their needs. As a result, this action will prevent people to commit to crime because of economical crisis. Secondly, is education. Educating society is highly important to build such character. Schools and universities are playing significant role to build national character. If their manner are formed, they would have strong personality and less to even think to commit crimes.
To conclude, being in econimical struggle and less educated are the main reasons people doing crime again and again. In order to overcome this anomali, I suggest the government to: providing financial support for those who need it and educating society for better characters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...nt people to commit to crime because of economical crisis. Secondly, is education. Educati...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ating society for better characters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20890410959 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75032837221 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595890410959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2499758423 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0526315789 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3684210526 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236225049204 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059441852815 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558385699601 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134275293622 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627723498679 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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